Animation Scriptwriting
Stories - Part One: Creating Stories
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Structure outlines

The basic structure of a story can be set down in a few sentences. It is called a 'Précis' of the story. Here is a précis of Cinderella:

1.

Cinderella's father is a widower who has remarried to a woman with two ugly daughters.

   
2.

Cinderella is orphaned when her father dies. The stepmother is jealous of Cinderella who is more beautiful than her daughters.

   
3.

The stepmother makes Cinderella into a servant. Cinderella is very unhappy.

   
4.

The Prince is looking for a wife. He invites all eligible ladies to a Ball so he can find one.

   
5.

The stepmother does not allow Cinderella to go, but Cinderella has a fairy Godmother.

   
6.

The Fairy Godmother is able to give Cinderella the clothes and coach to go to the ball.

   
7.

The magic of the fairy godmother only lasts a short time. Cinderella is a success at the ball but must leave before the Prince can discover whom she is.

   
8.

She rushes off but leaves her slipper.

   
9.

The Prince finds the slipper, and is able to trace her. He marries her. Etc.

The story is completely summed up so that anyone making it into a film would have a clear idea of the development. Yet it is still open to a variety of interpretations.

 Exercise


Write a précis for the following stories:

Moby Dick - The Three Little Pigs - Snow White
Rumplestiltskin

  

You can retain the same basic structure yet come up with a different story. Here are some variations on the Cinderella story:

1.

It could be updated to modern times, or the future.

   
2.

It might use three boys instead of girls.

   
3.

The father may not have died but just gone away and thought to be dead. He returns.

   
4.

The ugly sisters might be nice but misunderstood.

   
5.

Cinderella might be beautiful but a nasty person.

   
6.

One ugly sister might be nice and the other nasty.

   
7.

The Fairy Godmother might be a Witch who wants something in return for helping Cinderella.


 Exercise


Write out three possible variations on the Cinderella theme.

  
 
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